Wednesday, May 15, 2013

Stuck in a moment...

He was coming back
The sun was shining bright
amidst the chaos
He had lost his track
She turned her face away
With her eyes glued to the world outside
She was thinking or ignoring he didn't care
Stuck in a moment, his heart began to pray
It had skipped a beat
Hoping she would turn around
And when she did
The earth slipped beneath his feet
This girl was the most beautiful he had ever seen
There were other people
Laughing & chatting all around
But for him the place was quiet & serene
He didn't blink & kept his eyes fixed
On the angel he had never seen
The entire bus was moving
Was it reality or his mind jinxed?
He couldn't remember what he was thinking
He never wanted the moment to end
In an instant she got off
he sighed & felt his heart sinking
She was like a priceless work of art
Like an enigma
Her beauty, her face, her eyes
were forever etched in his heart

Wanted to write a poem, so why not on a feeling called love.. :) Happens to all..

Not that good.. But as my best good friend says.. "Next one will be better".. (If there is one).. Anyways.. Comments/Criticism appreciated.. ;)

God Bless!!


Fizz Genuine said...

Firstly, I love the song - "Stuck in the moment". And secondly, dont underestimate yourself. Its good piece of writing. And as a poet (or thats what I take pride in calling myself, believe in your work. This Poem is the best one you have written, only to be replaced by the next one that you write. And I hope you write another one soon.

Seththewhizkid said...

Thanks for commenting.. :) And also for encouraging me.. I will definitely write another.. & a better one..

Will also visit your blog & check out your poetry.. :)

Happy Blogging..

Arpit Rastogi said...

Romantic kitty.. :*
Ye to kisi sachhi ghatna pe adharit lag ri hai.. :P
Good one! :)

Deepti said...

Love umm-hmm :P

Nice poem seth :)
Koi happy ending wali likho agli baar apni hindi movies ki tarah :)

Seththewhizkid said...

haha ya my first 'romantic' post on blogger.. :D
Sachi ghatna hi laga le.. ;) Kaash! :P
And thanks :D

Seththewhizkid said...

haha umm hmm.. :D Thanks and will definitely write one with happy ending.. :D

Manoj Singh said...

Good poem...

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Seththewhizkid said...

Thank you :)